character and background rough

so so fra i have this O-o
its my character with a background the other 2 girls thata re fighting a monster are in her group so i was wondering is it good? should i change soemthing T-T *dies*

I really like the perspective on this. Though I kinda feel like I want to see her interacting more with what's going on around her?... I don't know I think to give you more of a critique I would definately like to see awesome gestures for the girls in the back ground. I love where its going though, don't give up, your almost there!

That can be a tough perspecitve to pull off, but its also a good challenge! Clean up the lines and we can help more I think. I agree though, she could be interacting more with the scene.

This is totally cool!!! This is very different from your other work. Can't wait to see something cleaned up.

yeah ty guyz <3
i would put her in more action pose that she is interacting but as andy said i think im gonna keep this pose and just have it as like and introduction to character i would love to do an action pose but i shall do that after this one XD

I'd have to agree. This is definitely stronger as a defining shot than and action shot. I think with an action shot you wouldn't necessarily want such a strong perspective. Either way this is totally cool.