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Vecor work - PainTed TeaRs

Post by JohnHowes on Mon Jul 29, 2013 1:33 pm



I am mostly done but i'd like some feedback on the overall composition.

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Post by jonbaldi on Mon Jul 29, 2013 7:51 pm

You graphic artist always make me jealous, because this is very artistic and colorful. Though I do like it, and the line quality is great, something about does seem a little wobbley to me. Maybe a little too much openess on the upper right design. But I don't know if you should change anything really.
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Post by JohnHowes on Mon Jul 29, 2013 11:22 pm

jonbaldi wrote:You graphic artist always make me jealous, because this is very artistic and colorful. Though I do like it, and the line quality is great, something about does seem a little wobbley to me. Maybe a little too much openess on the upper right design. But I don't know if you should change anything really.

I'm not a graphic artist... I'm an animator or at least i'm trying to be. yeah I felt like the upper left was a bit more open then the rest too. I considered putting some of the repeating circle design I got going on else where up there but I figured I'd see what everyone else had to say.

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Post by jonbaldi on Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:34 pm

It is still a really lovely piece, and do feel I'm nit picking. keep up the great work of imagination.
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