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Post by casey colledge on Wed Mar 27, 2013 12:32 am

So I am creating a character to rig and I like the body but I could use some pointers for the face to get it looking a little more appealing. As it is, it just doesn't seem like a character I would be interested to watch. This will be for a rigging reel I am going to make so I would really appreciate any and all feedback ya'll have to offer. THANKS!!!

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Post by skyledragon on Wed Mar 27, 2013 3:29 pm

He is a very average Joe, which isn't a bad thing if that is the character type you are going for but I take it it isn't. Do you have a sketch you are working off of?

One thing I do see is that the arms are really long.
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Post by casey colledge on Wed Mar 27, 2013 5:11 pm

Yeah, I noticed the arms after I posted this. So, I already fixed that. I don't really have any sketches that I am going by. I am trying to create a basic human character but, I need to make him more appealing. I am hoping to get it to be something similar in appearance to Malcolm.
The head is mainly what I need notes on. There is a link to an image of the face if that helps.

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Post by skyledragon on Wed Mar 27, 2013 5:33 pm

Well the long chin makes him feel older and more "uptight" Maybe if you shortened and rounded the chin it would help...
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Post by casey colledge on Sat Mar 30, 2013 8:34 pm

I asked Andy for some notes on my model and here is what he said. I thought I would share with everyone so you all can put in your thoughts and notes. There are three images included with Andy's notes. You will have to click on the links in my post to see them all. Thanks again everyone!




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Post by skyledragon on Sat Mar 30, 2013 10:06 pm

Those are some really great notes! Thanks for posting them here, they are very helpful Very Happy
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Post by casey colledge on Sat Mar 30, 2013 11:15 pm

So here is where I am on the head. I haven't implemented any of Andy's notes as of yet but, I would like to know what everyone thinks about the changes I made to the head.




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Post by skyledragon on Tue Apr 02, 2013 7:40 pm

Looking better for sure. The bridge of the nose might be a bit too thin. As well as his cheeks. But if he is a wimpy type character than that might be what you want. Have you played around with making the irises of his eyes bigger? His eyes just look very stark. Which I know you want them in a neutral pose for rigging but it almost seems to surprised to be relaxed. Loving the shape of the hair Very Happy
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