Character Animation final project

Right now I just have the first basic blocking pass and I'm trying to be sure this reads right.
The character is trying to describe the different kinds of men women like to someone who's off screen. Thoughts so far? Should I add anything right now?

So far it looks good. You have some good gestures going for the dialog.

You have her starting in a thoughtful pose with half folded arms. You should start her with both harms folded and then move into the half on the word "Two". You have the flick of the wrist which suggests the same thing but I think starting her in a relaxed pose would show the gesture more.

Also you have her hips moving like she is shifting her weight from side to side. I like that but it is super subtle. You may want to include the upper body with that and move her across the screen. She is dead center on the screen at all times. Moving her around on the screen would ad interest.

Pass number two, changed a few things thanks to Doug's notes.

After "tall men" there isn't much time to get the hand from where its at at the elbow then up by chin. But you might have that planned out in your head already. Otherwise I still think is looking good. lol maybe I've been away from school to long to know what to say.

Yet another update, with basic lip-sync.

The only spot I noticed something off was at the very last word. The mouth seems to go a bit wide at the corners for the sound of the word "men." What class is this for?

Character animation.

Fun. Hows it going?