classic cartoon manuver
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classic cartoon manuver
Racoon ball animation. Going for a classic cartoon joke. please give me some feed back. I'll apply them as soon as possible
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50azSPDOr_0&feature=youtu.be
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50azSPDOr_0&feature=youtu.be
JohnHowes- Keep'n it reel
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Join date : 2013-03-04
Re: classic cartoon manuver
So what I'm noticing is that arches the the follow through. The tail does seem be a little jagged when it bounces, kind of like the tail doesn't want to listen to the rest of the body. And the arch of the final jump to its plummet, it sort of stops too hard in min-air. I can see maybe your going for like a swan dive stop (if you've seen how that works) but it's a little too strong, the arch needs to be smoother.
Re: classic cartoon manuver
ok i've applied your critiques as best as i can. Given the 140 frame limitation. How'd i do?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7dSDBjlLe6s&feature=youtu.be
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7dSDBjlLe6s&feature=youtu.be
JohnHowes- Keep'n it reel
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Re: classic cartoon manuver
I was permitted more frames. to pull off the classic stop in mid air but it doesn't feel right. see if you can't help me pin it down. I'd be greatful for any crit
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Igt18hBaUZ4&feature=youtu.be
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Igt18hBaUZ4&feature=youtu.be
JohnHowes- Keep'n it reel
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Join date : 2013-03-04
Re: classic cartoon manuver
you've got the stop down, you just need to play with the timing. It'd probably work better if the ball stopped at the apex of the jump instead of stopping in the middle of descent. The 3 jumps on the diving board read a little hard. It's like the ball is jumping and forcing the board down rather than letting the energy in the board assist on the way up.
Tsquared- Keep'n it reel
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Re: classic cartoon manuver
JohnHowes wrote:Racoon ball animation. Going for a classic cartoon joke. please give me some feed back. I'll apply them as soon as possible
Thanks you
h_tsopelas- Intern
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