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Post by JohnHowes on Tue Apr 30, 2013 10:41 pm

Racoon ball animation. Going for a classic cartoon joke. please give me some feed back. I'll apply them as soon as possible

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50azSPDOr_0&feature=youtu.be

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Re: classic cartoon manuver

Post by jonbaldi on Thu May 02, 2013 10:43 am

So what I'm noticing is that arches the the follow through. The tail does seem be a little jagged when it bounces, kind of like the tail doesn't want to listen to the rest of the body. And the arch of the final jump to its plummet, it sort of stops too hard in min-air. I can see maybe your going for like a swan dive stop (if you've seen how that works) but it's a little too strong, the arch needs to be smoother.
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Post by JohnHowes on Tue May 07, 2013 12:53 am

ok i've applied your critiques as best as i can. Given the 140 frame limitation. How'd i do?
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Post by JohnHowes on Sun May 12, 2013 9:10 pm

I was permitted more frames. to pull off the classic stop in mid air but it doesn't feel right. see if you can't help me pin it down. I'd be greatful for any crit
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Re: classic cartoon manuver

Post by Tsquared on Sun May 12, 2013 10:16 pm

you've got the stop down, you just need to play with the timing. It'd probably work better if the ball stopped at the apex of the jump instead of stopping in the middle of descent. The 3 jumps on the diving board read a little hard. It's like the ball is jumping and forcing the board down rather than letting the energy in the board assist on the way up.
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Re: classic cartoon manuver

Post by h_tsopelas on Tue May 21, 2013 6:03 am

JohnHowes wrote:Racoon ball animation. Going for a classic cartoon joke. please give me some feed back. I'll apply them as soon as possible


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