Jumping like a Ballerina

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Jumping like a Ballerina

Post by NissasPumpkin on Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:37 pm

Progress of my jumping off a cube, thoughts thus far?

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Re: Jumping like a Ballerina

Post by JohnHowes on Wed Apr 24, 2013 9:25 pm

the leap looks good right until the end. he hovers in the air before landing on the ground. the knees bend on landing which is good but then he very slowly gets up just before assuming a pose. I think it looks just a bit unnaturaul something about the timing needs adjustment. I can tell its meant to add variety to the timing of the rest of his ballerina moves but perhaps the slowness of it was pushed a little too far. I don't know you may want more opinions before you do anything to that.
-between frames 28 and 32 he does an impossible slide on one foot.
thats about all i've got for now good luck

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